Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Testosterone, winning, and losing
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@Hugo DL: Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:
- Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
- What psychological theory(ies) can help to understand? What is the main research in this area?
Let me know if I can do anything else as you go along. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:10, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
Heading casing edit
Hi Hugo DL. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:11, 23 August 2023 (UTC) |
- Thanks! I realised i was doing it sub-consciously and since changed it over so it fits the heading case style!
- Thanks for the heads up Hugo DL (discuss • contribs) 03:54, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
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Hi,
I have read over your chapter so far and made some minor grammar edits, added some hyperlinks and fixed some in text citations to be in line with APA 7 style. I have also noticed that the first image you have in your scenario box does not have a description. If you have any questions let me know. Keep up the good work! U3197031 (discuss • contribs) 05:24, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:50, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
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