Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Theory of positive disintegration and personal growth

Topic development feedback

The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

1. Title The wording and/or capitalisation of the title is incorrect. Be consistent with the book table of contents. The wording and/or capitalisation of the sub-title is incorrect. Be consistent with the book table of contents. 2. Headings Under-developed – needs work (see Tutorial 2) Use more descriptive headings Use sentence casing Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections 3. Overview Add a scenario or case study into a feature box (with an image) at the start of this section to help catch reader interest Simplify/abbreviate introductory description - move detail into subsequent sections Present focus questions in a feature box at the end of this section 4. Key points 5. Figure A relevant figure is presented Caption could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text 6. Learning feature Not developed Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Consider including more examples/case studies, quiz question(s), table(s) etc. 7. References OK 4 out of minimum of 6 references Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? For APA referencing style, check and correct: alphabetical order capitalisation italicisation Do not include location of publisher Check and correct formatting of issue number page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-) 8. Resources See also One of two links provided Use sentence casing Rename links so that they are more user friendly (see Tutorial 02) Also link to relevant Wikipedia pages External links Not developed 9. User page Very good Brief description about self provided – consider expanding Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Link provided to book chapter 10. Social contribution None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence – this was covered in Tutorial 03. Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see how to earn marks for social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:10, 17 August 2024 (UTC)