Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Social dominance and power motivation

Hey!

I saw your book chapter and and I just thought I would comment. This seems like a super interesting topic. If you haven't already I would suggest looking at this article the doi is 10.1093/oso/9780190629113.003.0020 and its by Robin Bergh, Gregory K. Davis, Sa-kiera T. J. Hudson, and Jim Sidanius and the article talks about 20 theories of social dominance and power comparison. As well as an article called When Inequality Fails: Power, Group Dominance, and Societal Change by Felicia Pratto*a, Andrew L. Stewarta, Fouad Bou Zeineddinea and they talk about the group power and how it can change. For formatting I would suggest making the top right hand image a little bit bigger so it is more visible. But besides that, great start and hope to read more! Joan-E-1405 (discuss • contribs) 05:31, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

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1. Title The title and/or sub-title were not correctly worded and/or formatted. This has been corrected. 2. Headings Basic, 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings 3. Overview Add a scenario or case study into a feature box (with an image) at the start of this section to help catch reader interest Make this section more user-friendly. Move details into a subsequent question. Use present rather than future tense Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended Open-ended focus questions are usually better than closed-ended (e.g., yes/no) questions Use bullet-points per Tutorial 2 Present focus questions in a feature box at the end of this section 4. Key points Very basic development of key points for each section, with limited use of relevant citations Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.# "Correlation" has a very specific (statistical) meaning. Consider replacing with "relation" and/or "relationship". It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan Use APA style 7th edition for citations Please read and follow the using genAI guidelines I recommend using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression because there are a lot of grammatical errors Conclusion (the most important section): Hasn't been developed 5. Figure A relevant figure is not presented and cited (see Tutorial 2) 6. Learning feature Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Consider including more examples/case studies, quiz question(s), table(s) etc. 7. References Insufficient Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? Move non-academic / non-peer reviewed sources to External links Do not use genAI as academic references - unreliable source - see genAI guidelines For APA referencing style, check and correct: capitalisation italicisation doi formatting make doi hyperlinks active (i.e., clickable) use dois where available instead of other links Remember that the goal is to identify and use the best academic theory and research about this topic 8. Resources See also Not developed External links Not developed 9. User page Created – minimal, but sufficient Brief description about self – consider expanding Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Add link to book chapter 10. Social contribution None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence – this was covered in Tutorial 03. Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see how to earn marks for social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:05, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

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Overall Overall, this is a basic presentation The presentation is over the maximum time limit. Content beyond 3 mins is ignored for marking and feedback purposes. Overview The opening conveys the purpose of the presentation in a basic way Create an engaging introduction to hook audience interest (e.g., through an example) A basic context for the presentation is established Consider asking focus questions to help focus and discipline the presentation Content Comments about the book chapter may also apply to this section The presentation addresses the topic There is too much content (goes over time). Provide a higher-level presentation. It is better to cover a small amount of well-selected content well than a large amount poorly. The presentation makes reasonably good use of relevant psychological theory The presentation makes insufficient/no use of relevant psychological research The presentation makes insufficient/no use of citations to support claims The presentation makes insufficient/no use of examples The presentation could be improved by providing practical advice The presentation provides easy to understand information Conclusion The conclusion provides a basic summary of the most relevant psychological theory and research about this topic The conclusion provides basic take-home message(s) The Conclusion only partly fitted within the time limit Audio The audio is easy to follow The presentation makes basic use of narrated audio Audio communication is well-paced Basic intonation The narration could benefit from further scripting and/or practice Audio recording quality was reasonably good Review microphone set-up to achieve higher recording quality. Probably an on-board microphone was used (e.g., keyboard and/or mouse clicks were audible). Consider using an external microphone. The narrated content is well matched to the target topic The narrated content lacked synthesis of the best psychological research about this topic Video Overall, visual display quality is basic The presentation makes basic use of text-based slides The font size is mostly sufficiently large to make it easy to read Some of the font size could be larger to make it easier to read The amount of text presented per slide makes it reasonably easy to read and listen at the same time The amount of text presented on one or more slides could be reduced to make it easier to read and listen at the same time The visual communication could be improved by including relevant images and/or diagrams The presentation is basically produced using simple tools The visual content is reasonably well matched to the target topic The visual content lacked synthesis of the best research about this topic Meta-data The video title does not match the chapter title and sub-title. This would help to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation and be consistent. Provide a written description of the presentation to help potential viewers A link to the book chapter is not provided A link from the book chapter is provided The presentation is incorrectly categorised as being for kids. This creates limitations, such as being unable to add the presentation to a playlist. More info. Licensing A copyright license for the presentation is not clearly indicated

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:27, 10 November 2024 (UTC)