Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Social dominance and motivation

Heading casing

Hi Cophiesollins. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:34, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

1. Title The title and/or sub-title were not correctly worded and/or formatted (fixed) 2. Headings Promising 3-level heading structure Consider simplifying to a 2-level structure Adjust to better fit with the revised topic Remove bold Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings 3. Overview Excellent - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box at the start of this section Add an image to the scenario or case study to help attract reader interest A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is provided Focus questions are somewhat aligned with sub-title and top-level headings The first two questions are promising The second two questions should be removed/revised Use bullet points 4. Key points Basic development of key points for most sections, with some relevant citations For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings# Use APA style for citations (e.g., alphabetical order for multiple citations) Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples Use Australian spelling (e.g., analyze -> analyse; behavior -> behaviour) Conclusion (the most important section): Hasn't been developed What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure A relevant figure is presented and captioned Caption could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style 6. Learning feature One use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) Consider including more examples/case studies, quiz question(s), table(s) etc. 7. References Very good Well done on identifying at least one possibly relevant systematic review and/or meta-analysis For APA referencing style, check and correct: capitalisation italicisation make doi hyperlinks active (i.e., clickable) 8. Resources See also Not developed External links Not developed 9. User page Good Chapter content moved into its own page Description about self provided Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to someone else's book chapter was provided (fixed) Move topic development content to dedicated page (fixed) 10. Social contribution None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence. This was explained in Tutorial 03. Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:34, 19 August 2024 (UTC)