Good job for starting this topic :) I'll make some edits on your chapter to fix your indenting. I've also added the subheading from the assignment list.
Some other suggestions are:
You've got to include some focus questions in the overview - e.g. what are the primary goals/outcomes of your chapter?
Refer to your figure 1 in the body of your chapter to get some extra points under 'figure' of the rubric
An interesting learning feature could be how does money motivate us? - e.g. money serves to meet our basic needs (warmth, home, food, clothes) but also allows us to engage with things that bring us joy (like going overseas, guilty splurges). Alternatively you could have a textbox asking people to reflect on how money can both positively and negatively impact emotions.
I suggest shortening the case study to make it a bit easier to read - I'll copy some suggested words below. I'd also suggest connecting your image to the case study more - what is it about the coins that is relevant? You could refer it to as something like Figure 1: Is more money worth it?
Case study
Jasper works in coding and loves what he does. He has recently been offered a job with the Government - it's not interesting work, but it does pay almost double his current salary and offers financial security. He decides to accept the job.
After 3 months starts Jasper to dread going into work. He is already getting tired of his coworkers and finds the work boring. He used to love his job and although he is making more money, he is struggling to find motivation to work.
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Basic development of key points for each section, with some relevant citations
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
No development
It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan
I recommend using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression such as checking grammatical and spelling errors
Very brief description about self – consider expanding
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
posts about the unit or project on other platforms such as the UCLearn discussion forum or on X using the #emot24
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