Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Machiavellianism and power motivation

Heading casing

Hi Joan-E-1405. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:18, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

Feedback

Hi @Joan-E-1405,

I've had a read of your chapter and it's coming together very nicely! I loved your integration of theory and research. I have added a couple of comments for you to consider and I hope these are helpful :) Where I have put the 'factual' comment, I thought your argument could be strengthened with a citation of a source. Perhaps to make the research section even stronger, you could add how many participants were included. Well done, and I look forward to seeing your final book chapter! U3216883 (discuss • contribs) 23:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC)

General feedback

Your chapter on Machiavellianism and Power Motivation is fascinating and well-organised, especially with the practical examples and strong integration of theories. It really sheds light on how Machiavellian traits manifest in everyday settings. I’d love to see some quiz questions added to engage readers even more and reinforce key concepts! Cophiesollins (discuss • contribs) 05:52, 4 October 2024 (UTC)