Latest comment: 3 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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Excellent use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters; but do not put the links in bold
Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies)
Consider including more examples/case studies, quiz question(s), table(s) etc.
Brief description about self provided – consider expanding
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
At least three different types of contributions with direct link(s) to evidence
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Latest comment: 11 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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The chapter sub-title but not the chapter title is used in the name of the presentation. This would help to convey the purpose of the presentation and be consistent.
A very good written description of the presentation is provided
Latest comment: 8 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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Overall, this is a very good chapter. It successfully uses psychological theory and some research to address a practical, real-world phenomenon or problem.
Good use of academic, peer-reviewed citations to support claims
In some places, better use could be made of academic, peer-reviewed citations (e.g., see the [factual?] tags)
For additional feedback, see the following comments and these copyedits
Overall, the quality of written expression is very good
Avoid one sentence paragraphs. Communicate one idea per paragraph using three to five sentences.
Use 3rd person perspective (e.g., "it") rather than 1st (e.g., "we") or 2nd person (e.g., "you") perspective[1] in the main text, although 1st or 2nd person perspective can work well for case studies or feature boxes
Layout
The chapter is well structured, with major sections using sub-sections
Avoid having sections with 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings
Include an introductory paragraph before branching into the sub-sections (see [Provide more detail] tags)
Grammar
The grammar for some sentences could be improved (e.g., see the [grammar?] tags)
Basic use of embedded in-text interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Adding more interwiki links for the first mention of key words and technical concepts would make the text even more interactive. See example.
No use of embedded in-text links to related book chapters. Embedding in-text links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project.
Basic use of figure(s)
No use of table(s)
Reasonably good use of feature box(es)
Reasonably good use of scenarios, case studies, or examples
Basic use of quiz(zes) and/or reflection question(s)
The quiz questions could be improved by being more focused on the key points and/or take-home messages
The quiz questions could be more effective as learning prompts by being embedded as single questions within each corresponding section rather than as a set of questions at the end
Excellent use of interwiki links in the "See also" section
Very good use of external links in the "External links" section
~2 logged contributions with direct links to evidence
~1 logged contributions without direct links to evidence, so unable to easily verify and assess. See tutorials for guidance about how to get direct links to evidence.