Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Grit and conscientiousness

Initial suggestions

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@U3229789: Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:

Let me know if I can do anything else to support the development of this chapter. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:07, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Heading casing

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Hi U3229789. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:

Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory

Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:55, 10 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you :) U3229789 (discusscontribs) 12:30, 10 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

How to make hanging referencing

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Hi U3229789. Here's some formatting to add into your reference list so that the references are hanging:

{{Hanging indent|1=

Copy your references here

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U3225022 (discusscontribs) 02:52, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Topic development feedback

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  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  1. Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development by expanding the structure
  2. Reasonably good alignment between focus questions and heading structure, but consider closer alignment
  3. The Overview should not have sub-headings (I've fixed)
  1. Excellent - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions
  2. A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box at the start of this section
  3. Add an image to the scenario or case study to help attract reader interest
  4. A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is provided
  5. Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended
  6. Remove case study from focus questions; make these questions more generic
  1. Excellent – key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations
  2. There seems to be reasonably good coverage of theory, however, strive to balance the content with critical review of relevant research
  3. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. Underway
  1. A relevant figure is presented, captioned, and cited
  2. Caption could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text
  3. Consider increasing image size from to make it easier to view
  1. Excellent use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters; but do not put the links in bold
  2. Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies)
  3. Consider including more examples/case studies, quiz question(s), table(s) etc.
  1. Excellent
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation
  1. See also
    1. Excellent
    2. Use alphabetical order
  2. External links
    1. Excellent
    2. Use alphabetical order
  1. Very good
  2. Brief description about self provided – consider expanding
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter
  1. At least three different types of contributions with direct link(s) to evidence
  2. If adding the second or subsequent link to a page (or a talk/discussion page), create a direct link like / Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.
  3. Use a numbered list (see Tutorial 02)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:07, 17 August 2024 (UTC)Reply


Multimedia presentation feedback

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Overall

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  1. Overall, this is a reasonably good presentation
  1. The opening clearly conveys the purpose of the presentation
  2. Engaging introduction to hook audience interest
  3. A context for the presentation is established
  4. How does the example illustrate the relationship between grit and conscientiousness
  5. Focus questions and/or an outline of topics are presented
  1. Comments about the book chapter may also apply to this section
  2. The presentation addresses the topic
  3. An appropriate amount of content is presented — not too much or too little
  4. The presentation makes good use of relevant psychological theory
  5. Grit theory suggests that passion and perseverance are key components
  6. The presentation makes basic use of relevant psychological research
  7. How correlated are grit and conscientiousness?
  8. What are the arguments for and against the difference between grit and conscientiousness
  9. The presentation makes reasonably good use of citations to support claims
  10. The presentation makes basic use of examples
  11. The presentation provides basic practical advice
  12. The presentation provides easy to understand information
  1. The conclusion provides a reasonably good summary of the most relevant psychological theory and research about this topic
  2. The conclusion provides basic take-home message(s)
  1. The audio is easy to follow
  2. The presentation makes reasonably good use of narrated audio
  3. Audio communication is well-paced
  4. Reasonably good intonation
  5. The narration is well practiced and/or performed
  6. Audio recording quality was basic/
  7. Review microphone set-up to achieve higher recording quality
  8. Probably an on-board microphone was used (e.g., keyboard and/or mouse clicks were audible). Consider using an external microphone.
  9. The narrated content is well matched to the target topic
  10. The narrated content lacked synthesis of the best psychological theory and research about this topic
  1. Overall, visual display quality is reasonably good
  2. The presentation makes basic use of text-based slides
  3. The font size is sufficiently large to make it easy to read
  4. The amount of text presented per slide makes it easy to read and listen at the same time
  5. The visual communication could be improved by including relevant images and/or diagrams
  6. The presentation is basically produced using simple tools
  7. The visual content is well matched to the target topic
  1. The chapter sub-title but not the chapter title is used in the name of the presentation. This would help to convey the purpose of the presentation and be consistent.
  2. A very good written description of the presentation is provided
  3. Consider using time codes
  4. A link to the book chapter is not provided
  5. A link from the book chapter is provided
  1. A copyright license for the presentation is clearly indicated

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:32, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply


Book chapter review and feedback

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Overall

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  1. Overall, this is a very good chapter. It successfully uses psychological theory and some research to address a practical, real-world phenomenon or problem.
  2. Good use of academic, peer-reviewed citations to support claims
  3. In some places, better use could be made of academic, peer-reviewed citations (e.g., see the [factual?] tags)
  4. For additional feedback, see the following comments and these copyedits
  1. Well developed
  2. Engages reader via a case study or scenario in a feature box; also include a relevant image
  3. Clearly explains the psychological problem or phenomenon
  4. The focus questions are clear
  5. Simplify the questions to avoid focus on Rachel
  1. An excellent range of relevant theories are selected, described, and explained
  2. Builds somewhat on other chapters and/or Wikipedia articles
  3. Insightful depth is provided about relevant theory(ies)
  4. Use more tables, figures, and/or lists to help convey key theoretical information
  5. In some places, there is insufficient use of academic, peer-reviewed citations (e.g., see the [factual?] tags)
  6. Reasonably good use of examples to illustrate theoretical concepts
  7. Consider using more examples to illustrate theoretical concepts
  1. Very good review of relevant research
  2. More detail about key studies would be ideal
  3. In some places, there is insufficient use of academic, peer-reviewed citations (e.g., see the [factual?] tags)
  4. Basic critical thinking about relevant research is evident
  5. Critical thinking about research could be further evidenced by:
    1. describing the methodology (e.g., sample, measures) in important studies
    2. considering the strength of relationships
    3. acknowledging limitations
    4. pointing out critiques/counterarguments
    5. suggesting specific directions for future research
  6. Some claims lack sufficient citation (e.g., see the [factual?] tags)
  1. Very good integration between theory and research
  1. Very good summary and conclusion
  2. Key points are well summarised
  3. Address the focus questions
  4. Add practical, take-home message(s)
  1. Written expression
    1. Overall, the quality of written expression is very good
    2. Avoid one sentence paragraphs. Communicate one idea per paragraph using three to five sentences.
    3. Use 3rd person perspective (e.g., "it") rather than 1st (e.g., "we") or 2nd person (e.g., "you") perspective[1] in the main text, although 1st or 2nd person perspective can work well for case studies or feature boxes
  2. Layout
    1. The chapter is well structured, with major sections using sub-sections
    2. Avoid having sections with 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings
    3. Include an introductory paragraph before branching into the sub-sections (see [Provide more detail] tags)
  3. Grammar
    1. The grammar for some sentences could be improved (e.g., see the [grammar?] tags)
  4. APA style
    1. Use sentence casing for the names of disorders, therapies, theories, etc.
    2. Use serial commas[2]. Video (1 min)
    3. Figures
      1. Briefly captioned; provide more detail to help connect the figure to the text
      2. Use this format for captions: Figure X. Descriptive caption goes here in sentence casing. See example.
      3. Each Figure is referred to at least once within the main text using APA style
    4. Citations use excellent APA style (7th ed.)
    5. References use very good APA style:
      1. Check and correct use of capitalisation[3]
      2. Check and correct use of italicisation
      3. Move non-peer reviewed sources into the External links section
  1. Good use of learning features
  2. Basic use of embedded in-text interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Adding more interwiki links for the first mention of key words and technical concepts would make the text even more interactive. See example.
  3. No use of embedded in-text links to related book chapters. Embedding in-text links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project.
  4. Basic use of figure(s)
  5. No use of table(s)
  6. Reasonably good use of feature box(es)
  7. Reasonably good use of scenarios, case studies, or examples
  8. Basic use of quiz(zes) and/or reflection question(s)
  9. The quiz questions could be improved by being more focused on the key points and/or take-home messages
  10. The quiz questions could be more effective as learning prompts by being embedded as single questions within each corresponding section rather than as a set of questions at the end
  11. Excellent use of interwiki links in the "See also" section
  12. Very good use of external links in the "External links" section
    1. Use alphabetical order
  1. ~2 logged contributions with direct links to evidence
  2. ~1 logged contributions without direct links to evidence, so unable to easily verify and assess. See tutorials for guidance about how to get direct links to evidence.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:59, 13 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

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