Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Functional approach to volunteerism

Heading casing

Hi U32314488. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:04, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

1. Title The title and/or sub-title were not correctly worded and/or formatted (fixed) 2. Headings See earlier comment about Heading casing Drop "Introduction" as a heading (pedestrian). Incorporate this content into the Overview and/or other, more specificly named sections Adopt closer alignment between sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections 3. Overview OK Add an image to the scenario to help attract reader interest A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is provided Reduce/simplify the number of focus questions Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended 4. Key points Promising development of key points for each section Basic use of citations Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples Consider using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression such as checking grammatical and spelling errors Conclusion (the most important section) hasn't been developed What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure A relevant figure is not presented and cited (see Tutorial 2) 6. Learning feature Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters (see Tutorial 2) Promising use of one or more scenarios/examples/case studies Consider including one or more quiz question(s) about the take-home messages Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information 7. References Basic Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? Move non-academic / non-peer reviewed sources to See also (for Wikiversity and Wikipedia links) and External links Check and correct APA referencing style: capitalisation doi formatting make doi hyperlinks active (i.e., clickable) 8. Resources See also Links lacked relevance to this section (have been moved or removed) External links Not developed (see Tutorial 2) 9. User page Basic Description about self provided Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Add link to book chapter 10. Social contribution Please review lectures and tutorials in Module 1 and 2 to better understand what's required None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence (see Tutorial 03). Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:04, 2 September 2024 (UTC)