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Could benefit from either simplification (e.g., to 2-levels) or rebalancing (e.g., one section has lots of sub-headings, other sections have no sub-headings)
The headings about social media / technology are a little confusing because this is part of the core topic, although these could provide useful examples/scenarios
Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings
Partial development of key points for some sections, with some relevant citations
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Provide the big picture (e.g., in basic terms, what is the model?). The current notes about to be detail without context.
Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples
It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan
Use APA style 7th edition for citations
I recommend using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression because there are grammatical and spelling errors
Conclusion (the most important section):
Hasn't been developed
What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.