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Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development by expanding the structure
Reduce explanation of ACEs and RT as stand-alone concepts (briefly summarise and embed links to other book chapters and/or Wikipedia article for more info)
Concentrate on the relationship between ACEs and RT based on psychological science
Reasonably good alignment between focus questions and heading structure, but consider closer alignment
Partial development of key points for some sections, with some relevant citations
Lack of sufficient citations
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Avoid providing too much background information. Briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal wiki links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content of this on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
Strive for an integrated balance of theory and research, with practical examples
It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan
Conclusion (the most important section):
Underway
Currently reads like a wall of text - is it AI-generated? If so, this hasn't been acknowledged and would be a violation of academic integrity.
What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.