Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Conspiracy theory motivation

Latest comment: 4 months ago by U3216883 in topic Peer comments

News article

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https://www.theguardian.com/society/2023/oct/04/escape-from-the-rabbit-hole-the-conspiracy-theorist-who-abandoned-his-dangerous-beliefs

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:08, 4 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Initial suggestions

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@U3223114: Thanks for taking on this topic.

Note that there was a previous, but inadequate attempt at this topic in 2022. I encourage you to check it out as well as the feedback here: Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Conspiracy theory motivation#Book chapter review and feedback as you plan out this chapter.

There was also an inadequate attempt in 2020, so check out that attempt and the feedback too: Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Conspiracy theory motivation#Book chapter review and feedback.

Let me know if I can do anything else to assist. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:26, 31 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

You mentioned that conspiracies often have alternative explanations for events attributed to covert actions by powerful entities. Perhaps you could discuss how the “powerful entities” theory is often a racist one, whereby they are often perceived to be certain minority groups. For example, conspiracies often have theories about a “Jewish cabal”, thereby being antisemitic/racist.--MT200107 (discusscontribs) 03:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the tip :) 58.84.136.171 (discuss) 04:18, 13 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Peer comments

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Hello, I find this topic really fascinating, I love to see the emphasis placed on all the cognitive elements of conspiracy theory belief. Further to the point of echo-chambers in confirming peoples' pre-existing beliefs, I found this TED talk from the perspective of a man who used to believe in the conspiracy that birds were full of surveillance equipment fascinating, as he exposes the cognitive dissonance and confirmation bias discussed https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VEkzweBJPM

Hi Vanessa, not really a suggestion more an encouragement. I had a read of your overview and your chapter is sounding very interesting! I didn't know about the chemtrails theory! I am looking forward to coming back over the next few weeks to learn more! - Rachael. --U3218323 (discusscontribs) 09:20, 16 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, hopefully you continue to enjoy the content :) 58.84.136.171 (discuss) 04:15, 13 September 2023 (UTC)Reply


Hi Vanessa, it looks like your book chapter is off to a great start. If you are looking for external resources, there is a podcast episode by the American Psychological Association called “why people believe in conspiracy theories”. I have linked it below in case you want to check it out. https://www.apa.org/news/podcasts/speaking-of-psychology/conspiracy-theories All the best with the rest of your chapter! --U3230003 (discusscontribs) 22:18, 18 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, I will definitely take a look! 58.84.136.171 (discuss) 04:15, 13 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi there, Your overview section is really engaging. I was immediately drawn to the case study and this also kept me reading. It does sound like a really interesting topic. I find flat-Earth conspiracies amusing but interesting at the same time, so here's link to an article from the Conversation. It is hard to argue about beliefs but Adam Grant does shed some light on it in his book 'Think Again'. He also mentions cognitive dissonance as a concept relevant to conspiracy theorists and how their beliefs get stronger.

All the best. --JasnaM (discusscontribs) 12:42, 23 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Jasna, I'll check out the article. I too find everything to do with this topic fascinating. 58.84.136.171 (discuss) 04:17, 13 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

--U3216883 (discusscontribs) 00:25, 14 August 2024 (UTC) Hi Vanessa, I have really enjoyed reading your chapter and think it is a great contribution to our Motivation and Emotion Book. I particularly liked that you opened with a case study which engaged the reader. This inspired me to add a case study to my book chapter too. Since the CrowdStrike outage, more conspiracy theories have circled the internet. I have linked one below in case you want to check it out: https://www.france24.com/en/technology/20240720-online-conspiracy-theories-abound-after-major-global-it-crashReply


Topic development feedback

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  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted
  1. Excellent – Well developed 2-level heading structure, with meaningful headings that directly relate to the core topic
  2. Consider whether closer alignment between the focus questions and top-level headings may be helpful
  1. Move scenario box to top of section
  2. Engaging opening
  3. Use 3rd person perspective (except perhaps for scenarios)
  4. See comment in previous section re focus question / heading alignment
  1. Excellent – key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations
  2. Good balance of theory and research
  3. Include introductory paragraph before going into sub-sections
  4. Note to watch out for lumping people into "conspiracy theorists" or not; we probably all belief some conspiracy theory to some extent (so it may be more like a continuum)
  5. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. Promising
    2. In a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?
  1. Excellent use of figures with captions
  2. Figure(s) are cited at least once in the main text (but remove full-stop)
  1. Promising use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters
  2. Useful examples/case studies
  1. Very good
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. make doi hyperlinks active (i.e., clickable)
    2. page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-)
  3. I've added the hanging indent template
  4. Remove bullet-points and nowiki tags (see Edit source)
  1. See also
    1. Excellent
  2. External links
    1. Excellent
  1. Excellent – used effectively
  2. Description about self provided – consider expanding
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter
  1. Excellent – at least three different types of contributions with direct link(s) to evidence

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:21, 20 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Book chapter review and feedback

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  1. Overall, this is an excellent chapter. It successfully uses psychological theory and research to help address a practical, real-world phenomenon or problem.
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  1. Well developed
  2. Engages reader interest by introducing a case study and/or scenario with an image in a feature box
  3. Clearly explains the problem or phenomenon
  4. Clear focus questions
  1. An excellent range of relevant theories are selected, described, and explained - this is a tour de force
  2. The chapter doesn't wander off into discussion of irrelevant theory
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  2. Insightful depth is provided about relevant theory(ies)
  3. Key citations are well used
  4. Excellent use of examples to illustrate theoretical concepts
  1. Excellent review of relevant research
  2. Excellent critical thinking about relevant research is evident
  3. Claims are well referenced
  1. Excellent integration between theory and research
  1. Excellent summary and conclusion
  2. Key points are well summarised
  3. Clear take-home message(s)
  1. Written expression
    1. Overall, the quality of written expression is excellent
    2. Use 3rd person perspective (e.g., "it") rather than 1st (e.g., "we") or 2nd person (e.g., "you") perspective[1] in the main text, although 1st or 2nd person perspective can work well for case studies or feature boxes
  2. Layout
    1. The chapter is well structured, with major sections using sub-sections
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  3. Grammar, spelling, and proofreading are excellent
  4. APA style
    1. Use double (not single) quotation marks "to introduce a word or phrase used as an ironic comment, as slang, or as an invented or coined expression" (APA 7th ed., 2020, p. 159)
    2. Figures
      1. Figures are well captioned
      2. Each Figure is referred to at least once within the main text
    3. Citations use correct APA style
    4. References use almost correct APA style
  1. Excellent use of learning features
  2. Excellent use of embedded in-text interwiki links to Wikipedia articles
  3. No use of embedded in-text links to related book chapters. Embedding in-text links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project.
  4. Very good use of image(s)
  5. No use of table(s)
  6. Excellent use of feature box(es)
  7. Excellent use of quiz(zes) and/or reflection question(s)
  8. Excellent use of case studies or examples
  9. Good use of interwiki links in the "See also" section
  10. Very good use of external links in the "External links" section
  1. ~23 logged, useful, minor to significant social contributions with mostly direct links to evidence
  2. Thanks very much for your extensive contributions

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:11, 30 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

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  1. Overall, this is an excellent presentation
  1. An opening slide with the title and sub-title is displayed and narrated — this helps to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation
  2. Very engaging introduction to hook audience interest  
  3. A context for the presentation is clearly established through an example
  4. Consider asking focus questions or providing an outline of topics that lead to take-away messages.
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  2. The presentation addresses the topic
  3. An appropriate amount of content is presented — not too much or too little
  4. The first minute describes conspiracy theories. Perhaps this could be truncated to allow some focus on research.
  5. The presentation makes excellent use of relevant psychological theory
  6. The presentation makes implied use of relevant psychological research
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  9. The presentation makes excellent use of one or more examples or case studies or practical advice
  10. The presentation provides practical, easy to understand information
  1. A Conclusion slide is presented with excellent take-home message(s)
  1. The audio is easy to follow and interesting to listen to
  2. The presentation makes effective use of narrated audio
  3. Audio communication is well paced
  4. Very good intonation
  5. The narration is well practiced and/or performed
  6. Audio recording quality was very good
  7. There was some background noise. Review microphone set-up to achieve higher recording quality. Probably an on-board microphone was used (e.g., keyboard and/or mouse clicks were audible). Consider using an external microphone.
  8. The narrated content is well matched to the target topic (see content) but could have been more explicit about the best psychological research about this topic
  1. Overall, visual display quality is excellent
  2. The presentation makes creative, engaging use of mostly image based slides
  3. The font size is sufficiently large to make it easy to read
  4. The visual communication is effectively supplemented by images and/or diagrams
  5. The presentation is very well produced including images, webcam, text, and audio
  6. The visual content is well matched to the target topic (see content) but could also have synthesised the best psychological research about this topic
  1. The chapter sub-title but not the chapter title is used in the name of the presentation. The title would help to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation.
  2. A brief written description of the presentation is provided. Consider expanding.
  3. Excellent use of time codes
  4. Links to and from the book chapter are provided
  1. Image sources and their copyright status are communicated
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:08, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

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