Heading casing

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Hi KingMob221. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:

Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory

Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:14, 26 August 2022 (UTC)Reply


Topic development feedback

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  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted
  1. Good
  2. Description about self provided – consider expanding
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
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  1. Basic, 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development by expanding the structure
  1. Promising development of key points, with relevant citations
  2. Overview - Consider adding:
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  1. Excellent – A relevant figure is presented and it is appropriately captioned
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  1. Very good
  2. Hanging indent spacing fixed
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    1. page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-)
  1. See also
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  2. External links
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:10, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Content Suggestion

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Hi there. Brandolini's law states: "The amount of energy needed to refute bullshit is an order of magnitude bigger than that needed to produce it."

This may be useful in your overview about the dangers of conspiracy theories? check out the Wikipedia page for Brandolini's law if you are interested. U3162201 (discusscontribs) 01:36, 4 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Suggested source: Thinking Preferences and Conspiracy Belief

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Hi There! Not sure if you've checked this source out yet but I thought it could provide helpful information. It discusses the Jumping-to conclusion bias and if it has a more pronounced rate in those who display a strong belief in conspiracy theories.

[1]https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fpsyt.2020.568942/full BenjiD'Ange (discusscontribs) 06:07, 27 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

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  1. Overall, this is an insufficient chapter mainly because it is so brief
  2. I suspect that the recommended 5 topic development hours and 45 book chapter hours were not invested in preparing this chapter.
  3. Well under the maximum word count, so there is room to expand
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  1. Basic Overview
  2. Briefly explains the problem or phenomenon
  3. Consider introducing a case study or example or using an image to help engage reader interest
  4. Add focus questions in a feature box to help guide the reader and structure the chapter
  1. Promising, but insufficient use of relevant psychological theory about this topic
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    6. Citations are not in full APA style (7th ed.). For example:
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      2. Separate page numbers using an en-dash (–) rather than an em-dash (—)
      3. Move non-peer-reviewed sources to the "External links" section
  1. Basic use of learning features
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    1. Use bullet points per Tutorial 02
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  1. ~1 logged social contributions with direct links to evidence

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:38, 21 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

The "conspiracy theorist" archetype as a method for discrediting dissent and other inconveniences.

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It seems likely that this trope or archetype is maintained as a fixture of popular culture for the purpose of casting doubt and uncertainty upon various inconvenient disclosures and dissent. In other words, someone who claims that the earth is flat and builds such a reputation around various false or incredulous claims, or even just presents such an appearance, would then be a poor representative for a given disclosure or scandal and may harm the credibility of certain people or information merely by association alone. Or rather, that's what I'd do if I wanted to ruin the credibility of some disclosure or political objective. Send a bunch of kooks to lend their "authority" to the matter. I think the article needs to at least acknowledge this possibility, which is self-evident as a public relations strategy. AP295 (discusscontribs) 23:37, 7 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

I implore the author(s) to consider this carefully, and I'll ping @Jtneill: since they seem to be the primary author. I'm hardly the first person to observe that psychiatry is frequently abused to pathologize dissent or otherwise control public opinion. Broadly, the article conflates "conspiratorial beliefs" with irrational thought patterns, and obviously this might give the reader a skewed perspective. I could go on, but I'll wait to see what others have to say. AP295 (discusscontribs) 13:59, 8 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

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