Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Sublimation
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editFYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:52, 2 October 2022 (UTC) |
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:52, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:46, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:26, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
Book chapter resubmission feedback
edit- This resubmission was reviewed. See my copyedits. The main changes were:
- There are minor improvements to the introduction, including improvement to one of the focus questions
- Learning features: A couple of inter-wiki links to Wikipedia and Wikiversity pages have been added
- A basic attempt has been made to better address the question of how sublimation can be fostered, but a limited understanding of fostering sublimation as a mature defensive mechanism (compared to immature defensive mechanisms) is still evident
- There was some minor expansion of description of two research studies
- Written style
- Use 3rd perspective perspective instead of 1st person perspective
Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:26, 28 November 2022 (UTC)