Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Juvenile delinquency motivation
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editHi! Your book chapter is looking like its getting along really well! I was looking and found this really interesting article on juvenile delinquency and the factors that cause it! Hopefully this helps you out a little :) Link: https://web.archive.org/web/20190712172646id_/http://www.pscipub.com:80/Journals/Data/JList/Scientia%20Agriculturae/2015/Volume%20%209/Issue%201/6.pdf --U3204694 (discuss • contribs) 10:09, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
Raising the age of criminal responsibility
editHi there. It looks like your book chapter is coming along nicely. You have chosen a particularly interesting topic and one that is currently being considered in the ACT jurisdiction. There is currently debate as to the raising of the age of criminal responsibility from 10 years to 14 years. This might be useful in discussing the topic of juvenile delinquency and motivation. I have included the link to the discussion paper put forward by the Attorney-General of the ACT: https://s3.ap-southeast-2.amazonaws.com/hdp.au.prod.app.act-yoursay.files/4516/2433/2390/Discussion_Paper_-_FINAL.pdf
I hope this is useful!
Jonathan
Useful links to further research
editHi, your chapter is looking really good! I really enjoy the theories of motivation you have chosen. I have found a good resource that may be useful to include in your chapter; https://www.jstor.org/stable/1141635?casa_token=qwXQ-RpkfukAAAAA%3AHP4zSz43u-_xP3s4QJdm58vsg_ScHv8IlaNTMAhz3AHqNM7xFKNh216YDGw6MVMCpQjsHhTT3F-B_imeUd5Dwob65lO-cIfizqWKxYXCmv3j0Lf8Kg&seq=2#metadata_info_tab_contents The above article discusses the economic motivation behind crime that could be a useful point to raise. I know you touched on intrinsic and extrinsic motivation, and socioeconomic status could be interesting to discuss further:)
Hopefully this helps! Best of luck. - u3204463 --U3204463 (discuss • contribs) 00:48, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
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Detention as a cause for reoffending in juveniles
editHi! I can see you're getting close to your word count, but I feel like your final sections would benefit from touching on the tendency for juvenile offenders to reoffend if they are jailed. https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s11126-014-9296-4 is a really good review of relatively current literature on the topic, and while this particular review is based on america, similar findings have been found across quite a lot of European and some South-Asian countries, which might help your piece relate to a wider audience. Thanks! U3187741 (discuss • contribs) 22:40, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
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