Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Transcendental future time perspective, motivation, and emotion

Heading casing

 
Hi StutiDoshi1. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:

Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory

Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development

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Topic development feedback

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  1. The title and/or sub-title were not correctly worded and/or formatted (fixed)
  1. See earlier comment about Heading casing
  2. Basic, mostly 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure
  3. Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings
  4. Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections
  5. Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings
  1. Excellent - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions
  2. A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box with an image at the start of this section
  3. Consider adapting the scenario to refer to future transcendental time perspective; or at least tailor towards how this perspective may affect the person's present emotion and motivation
  4. Simplify/abbreviate the description of the problem/question i.e., make this section more user-friendly and move detail into subsequent sections.
  5. Focus questions are basic. They are quite general. As a better understanding of the topic develops, make these more specific.
  6. Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended
  1. Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
  2. Avoid providing too much background information (e.g., about time perspective). Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title (i.e., focus on transcendental time perspective.
  3. It may be necessary to search beyond just "transcendental" to include synonymous terms
  4. Promising balance of theory and research. Ideally, also include more examples.
  5. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. Well developed
    2. What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
  1. A relevant figure is presented and captioned
  2. Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style
  3. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters
  4. Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies)
  5. Promising use of quiz question(s)
  6. Focus the quiz question(s) on the take-home messages for each focus question
  7. Promising use of table(s)
  8. Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information

No comment

  1. Very good
  2. Are there any systematic reviews about this topic?
  3. Check and correct APA referencing style:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation
  1. See also
    1. OK
    2. Also link to relevant Wikipedia pages
  2. External links
    1. OK
    2. Rename links so that they are more user friendly (see Tutorial 02)
  1. Very good
  2. Good
  3. Created – minimal, but sufficient
  4. Not created – see Tutorial 02
  5. Description about self provided
  6. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  7. Add link to book chapter
  1. Excellent – at least three different types of contributions with direct link(s) to evidence
  2. If adding the second or subsequent link to a page (or a talk/discussion page), create a direct link like / Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:16, 22 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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