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Hey there,
This is a very interesting topic for your book chapter. i have always found sleep to be an interesting topic when it comes to psychology. One of the reasons i am so interested in sleep is because i suffer from sleep apnea myself, which brings me back to your book chapter. I was wondering if maybe physiological factors such as sleep apnea will affect sleep onset. I have found this paper which might be interesting for you to look at:
-Chervin, R. D., & Aldrich, M. S. (2000). Sleep onset REM periods during multiple sleep latency tests in patients evaluated for sleep apnea. American journal of respiratory and critical care medicine, 161(2), 426-431.https://www.atsjournals.org/doi/full/10.1164/ajrccm.161.2.9905071
Good luck with your book chapter and the rest of semester.
Latest comment: 2 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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The correct title is used, but the sub-title (or a shortened version of it) is not used, as the name of the presentation. This would help to convey the purpose of the presentation and be consistent.
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A link from the book chapter is provided
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