Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Motivation in retirement

Topic development feedback

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1. Title The title and sub-title are correctly worded and formatted 2. Headings Basic, 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure Consider adopting closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections 3. Overview A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box at the start of this section A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is planned Description of the problem/topic should be brief and evocative. Keep this section user-friendly. Move detail into subsequent section. Present focus questions in a feature box at the end of this section 4. Key points Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations Strive for an integrated balance of theory and research Conclusion (the most important section): Hasn't been developed 5. Figure A relevant figure is presented and captioned Caption could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style 6. Learning feature One use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) Consider including quiz question(s), table(s) etc. 7. References Very good Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? For APA referencing style, check and correct: alphabetical order capitalisation italicisation 8. Resources See also Not developed External links Not developed 9. User page Created – minimal, but sufficient Very brief description about self – consider expanding Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to the book chapter is provided 10. Social contribution One out of three types of contributions made with with indirect link(s) to evidence The three types of contribution are making: direct improvements to other book chapters (past or current) comments on chapters (past or current) posts about the unit or project on other platforms If adding the second or subsequent link to a page (or a talk/discussion page), create a direct link like / Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:55, 18 August 2024 (UTC)