Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Fear of judgement and social media

Initial suggestions

@Ashdruett: Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:

• Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Fear
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Social media
• Also search past book chapters for related topics
• For the topic development, consider:
  • What psychological theory(ies) can help to understand and explain this topic?
  • What is the main research in this area?
• Let me know if I can do anything else to support the development of this chapter.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:52, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Thank you James! I really appreciate your assistance Ashdruett (discuss • contribs) 11:08, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

Feedback

Wow this topic is so interesting! As someone who experiences this persoanlly, it will be really good to read the final product to see if it will be able to help me overcome this problem! Your development is looking really good. U3200844 (discuss • contribs) 13:30, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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1. Title The title is correctly worded and formatted 2. Headings See earlier comment about Heading casing Promising, 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure I think there might be next level headings, but these are formatted as bold rather than as headings (see Tutorial 2) Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections 3. Overview Excellent - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box at the start of this section A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is provided Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended 4. Key points Excellent – key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations Use bullet-points per Tutorial 2 Promising balance of theory and research. Conclusion (the most important section): Well developed 5. Figure Excellent - A relevant figure is presented, captioned, and cited Note that "figure" should be "Figure"; similarly "table" should be "Table" 6. Learning feature Promising use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) Promising use of quiz question(s) Promising use of table(s) 7. References Very good Move non-academic / non-peer reviewed sources to External links Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? For APA referencing style, check and correct: italicisation 8. Resources See also Excellent External links Very good Select only the most relevant external links about this topic Move academic sources into references (and cite) 9. User page Excellent – used effectively Excellent description about self provided Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Link provided to book chapter 10. Social contribution Excellent – at least three different types of contributions with direct link(s) to evidence If adding the second or subsequent link to a page (or a talk/discussion page), create a direct link like / Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:27, 17 August 2024 (UTC)