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Legislation varies by country and is not necessary to answer the question; write for an international audience. Legislation in a particular country could be used an example.
Use APA style for citations
Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
Use 3rd person perspective
Consider using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression such as checking grammatical and spelling errors
Conclusion is underway
What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
A link to the book chapter is provided
Rename the link to the book chapter to make it more user-friendly (see Tutorial 02)
Latest comment: 1 month ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Thank you for tackling such an intense, and important topic that seems so prevalent in our times. For your topic I would recommend (if you have not already) looking intro the book 'Why does he do that?" as it pertains to domestic violence, and I would the book to be a haorriowing and informative read. Look over your chapter, I have noticed a few touches that could be made, for starters, I would recommend increasing the image size so as that would make it more readable. I would say your casestudy, while it is good, is too long anbd/or should be moved somewhere else throughout the chapter.