Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Optimism and physical health
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Hi AP269. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:00, 24 August 2021 (UTC) |
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Hi there!
Wow! Your book chapter is amazing, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Congrats on the work you have put into it so far! I do have a quick pointer that I hope is helpful before submission. You seem to have substantially gone over the word count. Remember that the word count includes your references, and not just the body of the chapter: https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Assessment/Chapter . To make your writing more concise, you might consider giving your writing a flat tone. For example, you could remove the word 'truly' in your first paragraph, and it would still read well.
I hope these points help, and you have a rewarding end of semester!
U3202904 (discuss • contribs) 08:16, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
Hey, your book chapter looks incredible! Here's a couple references that may be useful for your unrealistic optimism section; Sharot, T. (2011). The optimism bias. Current Biology, 21(23), 941-R945. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.cub.2011.10.030, Sharot, T., Korn, C., & Dolan, R. (2011). How unrealistic optimism is maintained in the face of reality. Nature Neuroscience, 14(11), 1475-1479. https://doi.org/10.1038/nn.2949 Good luck with it! --U3187208 (discuss • contribs) 01:22, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
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