Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Self-criticism and emotion
Body Dsymorphia and Eating disorders edit
Might be interesting to look into self-criticising that individuals with eating disorders and body dsymorphia experience.--U3177510 (discuss • contribs) 12:52, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
Werner et al. (2019) edit
This could be useful: The clinical trait self-criticism and its relation to psychopathology: A systematic review – Update, Journal of Affective Disorders, Volume 246, 2019, Pages 530-547, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jad.2018.12.069
Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:20, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
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Hey there! Adding on to the other comments here, there seems to be a topical discussion of self-criticism and psychopathology. Therefore, I just wanted to add that high self-criticism plays an important role in Social Anxiety Disorder. If you decide to add a section related to a variety of disorders, this article may help you discuss its role in Social Anxiety Disorder: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0010440X14003423?casa_token=xIcpq6TqulgAAAAA:4tez_GGoo_qJKWIGl-29HHV8ZNnHNkzY8MvFRDRPkJ9X-_QMkL-4IV0Fpxw3pyPLsWtpZ5ehcTY This article provides evidence for the role of high self-criticism in Social Anxiety Disorder and is from Lancu et al., 2015 Hope this helps with any new additions! :) --U3190016 (discuss • contribs) 04:55, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
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Hi, love the look of your chapter so far. However, I would suggest making the images slightly smaller. The large images give the chapter a messy feel, and having smaller images, of the same size would give your chapter a cleaner, more professional feel. U3189449 (discuss • contribs) 22:32, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:05, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
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