Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Performance feedback
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The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback. |
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APA style for citations
edit@U3178984: This is a minor suggestion about APA style for citations. Add a space before using a citation in brackets. For example, "... learned(Hattie & Timperley, 2007)" should be "... learned (Hattie & Timperley, 2007)". Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 14:51, 9 October 2020 (UTC)
Draft feedback
edit@U3178984: I've had a quick skim through this impressive-looking chapter. A few tips/suggestions:
- Consider linking the first mentions of key concepts to relevant Wikipedia pages or related book chapter topics. Wiki links were covered in Tutorial 2.
- Consider using Australian/British spelling - e.g., behaviour (Australian/British) vs. behavior (US); also analyse vs. analyze.
- There are some grammar and spelling errors. Consider inviting peers to help e.g., by posting the chapter on the UCLearn discussion forum. This will help to improve the chapter and give an opportunity for others to make social contributions.
- The hyperlinks in the reference list should be active (i.e., clickable)
Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:20, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Social Contributions
editHi, well done on your book chapter, there is a lot of very interesting relevant information regarding your topic. You have repeated "Feedback is one of the most powerful influences" twice right after each other, may I suggest that you change one of the sentences so they aren't repeated. May I also suggest that you change some sentences to bold italics or add something special to your page like a table or some sub headings to make it look more interesting and make viewers "want to read" your book chapter. --U3190523 (discuss • contribs) 07:01, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
Heading casing
editFYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development |
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:59, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
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The accompanying multimedia presentation has been marked according to the marking criteria. Marks are available via the unit's UCLearn site. Written feedback is provided below, plus see the general feedback page. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below. If you would like further clarification about the marking or feedback, contact the unit convener. |
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