Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Limbic system and emotion
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Wow! Your chapter is amazing! so informative! One thing though- I have noticed you have not used index referencing in your book chapter. Just a reminder APA formatting is required in psychology units :) => i.e. instead of (1) use (author, year) instead :)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:24, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
- Some additional feedback:
- @U3155259: I suggest adding a section that explains the limbic system and its role in emotion from an overall perspective, then move the table about "Primary structures of the limbic system" out of the Overview and into its own section, with sub-headings and expanded content for each key structure in terms of how it relates to emotion. An additional way that could be useful to communicate about this topic could be to provide a table of core emotions and explain if/how each of those emotions is enabled by the limbic system. Make sure to link the limbic structures and emotions to specific book chapters which contain more detail where available.
Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:37, 18 September 2020 (UTC)
Checked out APA reference format, and image caption. --U3178984 (discuss • contribs) 03:55, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:25, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
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