Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Vicarious post-traumatic growth

Heading casing

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings (or sentence casing). For example, use: ==Cats and dogs== rather than ==Cats and Dogs== -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:12, 30 August 2019 (UTC)

I also suggest using somewhat shorter headings (e.g, remove citations from headings). Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:12, 30 August 2019 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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Title and sub-title Good User page Created, with description about self and link to book chapter Used effectively Social contribution None summarised with links to evidence Section headings Remove citations Well developed 2-level heading structure See earlier comment about Heading casing. Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings. Avoid providing too much background information. Instead, briefly summarise generic concepts and provide internal wiki links to further information. Then the focus of most of the content can be on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title. Key points Key points are well developed, but incomplete for the latter sections. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles. Consider including more examples/case studies. Consider embedding one quiz question per major section rather than having one longer quiz towards the end. I suggest using "post-traumatic" as that is in the chapter title, to be consistent Image Provided, with an APA style caption Expand caption Cite each figure at least once in the main text. References Good. For full APA style: Use correct capitalisation Do not include issue numbers for journals which are continuously numbered within a volume Resources Excellent

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:14, 27 September 2019 (UTC)

Chapter review and feedback

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Overall Overall, this is an excellent chapter that successfully uses psychological theory and research to help address a practical, real-world phenomenon. Overview - There are some questions in the paragraph and some in bullet-point form. Consider consolidating and providing a less question-based intro, followed by focus questions. For additional feedback, see comments below and these copyedits. Theory Relevant theories are well selected, described, and explained. Integration between theories is excellent. Balanced, critical consideration evident. Research Relevant research is well reviewed and discussed in relation to theory. Written expression Written expression Overall, the chapter is very well written. Layout The chapter is well structured, with major sections using sub-sections. Learning features See also - add links to related book chapters Excellent use of interwiki links Embedding interwiki links links to related book chapters would help to integrate this chapter into the broader book project. Good use of images. Very good use of tables. Excellent use of feature boxes. Excellent use of quizzes. Good use of case studies or examples. Grammar Use serial commas[1] - it is part of APA style and generally recommended by grammaticists. APA style Citations use correct APA style. References are not in full APA style. For example: Check and correct use of capitalisation. Social contribution ~8 logged, useful, social contributions with direct links to evidence

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:19, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

Multimedia feedback

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Overall Overall, this is an excellent presentation. This presentation makes effective use of animated slide tools. Structure and content Well selected content - not too much or too little. The presentation is well structured. Add and narrate a Title slide which contains the title and sub-title, to help the viewer understanding the focus and goal of the presentation. Add and narrate an Overview slide, to help orientate the viewer about what will be covered. A Conclusion slide is presented with a take-home message(s). The presentation could be strengthened by adding a Conclusion slide with practical, take-home messages. Communication The presentation is fun, easy to follow, and interesting to watch and listen to. The presentation makes effective use of text and animated image based slides with narrated audio. Generally well paced, although perhaps leave longer pauses between sentences. This can help the viewer to cognitively digest the information that has just been presented before moving on to the next point. Consider using greater upwards intonation to enhance listener interest and engagement. The font size is sufficiently large to make it easy to read. The visual communication is effectively supplemented by images. Production quality The chapter title and sub-title are used in the video title - this helps to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation. Audio recording quality was excellent. Video recording quality was excellent. Image source is provided. A copyright license for the presentation is provided. A link to the book chapter is provided. A link from the book chapter is provided. A written description of the presentation is provided.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:35, 17 November 2019 (UTC)