Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Mental toughness
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Hey! I found a link to a YouTube video that might help you with deciding on some key points for your book chapter. You might even be able to use it as inspiration for your audio-visual section. Here is the link! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LCPgvTRftZg --U3117399 (discuss • contribs) 05:52, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
Hi Mental toughness is a great topic! I'm not sure if you have seen the documentary "Into the Void"? Its about 2 guys who are climbing a mountain in Peru in the 80's and things don't quite go as planned! I found it was an incredible display of Mental Toughness. Thought you might be able to use it for your book chapter. --U3135539 (discuss • contribs) 04:28, 1 September 2017 (UTC)
Hey, here's an article you might like: "Why adventure fuels mental toughness" --u3122707 (discuss • contribs) 02:01, 24 September 2017 (UTC)
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Feedback about the Multimedia resubmission edit
- Use the full chapter title and sub-title on the opening slide and for the title of the video because this helps to match the book chapter and to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation.
- Provide a clickable link to the book chapter.
- Explain what MT and why it matters, and how it is similar to/different from related constructs.
- What is the key theory/theories?
- Consider using larger font to make the text easier to read.
- Why focus on optimism and coping - this isn't directly part of the topic (i.e., isn't part of the title and subtitle)?
- The presentation seems to conflate MT with coping?
- Is Grant Hackett a good example of MT? (Seems like his case demonstrates a lack of MT?)
- What are the practical, take-home messages?