Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Nucleus accumbens and motivation

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:08, 28 September 2022 (UTC)

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Hi there. Your book chapter has some overlapping concepts with mine: Reward system, motivation, and emotion. Feel free to check it out and we can share any helpful information with each other.

I found this link to be a useful overview of the brains reward system, and this is a great journal article with section 2 providing a nice overview. U3162201 (discuss • contribs) 01:53, 4 October 2022 (UTC)