Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Opioid use disorder

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Jackson McNee in topic Case study suggestion

Heading casing

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FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for sentence casing. For example, the wikitext should be:

== Cats and mice ==

rather than

== Cats and Mice ==

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:40, 19 September 2020 (UTC)Reply


Topic development feedback

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Title and sub-title

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  1. Title and sub-title casing and wording has been corrected to be consistent with the book table of contents

User page

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  1. Created
  2. About me
    1. Description about self provided
    2. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  3. Add link to book chapter

Social contribution

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  1. Indirect link(s) to evidence.
  2. Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.
  3. Use a numbered list.
  4. Add a brief summary of each contribution.

Section headings

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  1. Basic, 1-level heading structure - could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure.
  2. Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections.
  3. See earlier comment about Heading casing.

Key points

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  1. Overview - Consider adding:
    1. a description of the problem and what will be covered
    2. an image
    3. an example or case study
  2. Lack of theory and research.
  3. Basic development of key points for each section, without relevant citations.
  4. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters.
  5. Consider including more examples/case studies.
  6. Avoid overcapitalisation (APA style) - more info

Image

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  1. An image (figure) is presented.
  2. Caption
    1. does not use APA style.
    2. could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text.
  3. Cite each figure at least once in the main text.

References

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  1. OK
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. doi formatting
    2. Remove "Retrieved from"
    3. Include issue numbers
  3. Cite all references in text

Resources

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  1. See also
    1. Use bullet-points
  2. External links
    1. Use bullet-points
    2. Include source in brackets after link

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:40, 19 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

Case study suggestion

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A potential case study could be to explor the opioid crisis that was all over the news in America recently. I believe 128 people died from overdoses. could be an interesting case study--Jackson McNee (discusscontribs) 00:17, 18 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

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