Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Mystical experiences and emotion
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:51, 1 October 2018 (UTC)
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This topic is so interesting and very different. I have a few suggests though. I think reading your page I still didn't feel 100% sure on what Mystical experience was. A very simple and clear defintion, perhaps with applied examples, may really help. I also would really like to see a section on how different cultures experience this. I think you would find some very interesting traditions that would surprise many readers. Keep up the good work TaylorMal (discuss • contribs) 23:43, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:49, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
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