Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Conformity and emotion
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I really love the topic you have picked and i think you have a really good outline for it. I noticed that you haven't edited the quiz questions yet. A suggestion for a quiz question is the difference between private and public conformity. Joog 17 (discuss • contribs) 12:48, 02 September 2018 (UTC)
Thanks Joog_17! That is an excellent idea, I will keep that in mind for when I continue the chapter--U3097076 (discuss • contribs) 08:07, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
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Hi I thought it was great to include the study on Asch's line experiment, I have had a look on YouTube and found an a video clip of the original testings of this work. I think it would be a great suggestion to add as an external link to your chapter. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NyDDyT1lDhA --U3160483 (discuss • contribs) 12:12, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
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You have explained quite well the interesting phenomena that is conformity. However, I have a suggestion for you that may make your chapter higher in quality, and that is to read through what you have written a couple more times with the intent of looking out for spelling and grammatical errors. Finding and correcting these mistakes will make your chapter much more engaging and enjoyable for the reader. Otherwise, the content here is very interesting and enlightening! Thank you --Dtd1986 (discuss • contribs) 08:46, 30 August 2019 (UTC)Dtd1986
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Hey, I really love your topic so far! I found this article on 'Belief in collective emotions as conforming to the group' that I thought may be of interest! I hope you find it useful! --U3097480 (discuss • contribs) 12:16, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
Hey, great topic! perhaps a small section on the evolutionary/biological basis of conformity would be useful. Here's a link to a pretty good article https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3375089/ --U3151994
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