Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Bereavement and emotion
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editHello :)
Your topic development is very interesting and i've enjoyed it so far! For your overview, I liked the focus questions which brought my focus directly onto the essential questions regarding Bereavement, i was wondering if it would be worth having a section sepcifically covering the focus question "What is Bereavement" and its definition? Providing an outline of the structure of the chapter in the overview would also help the reader know what is covered in the chapter.
I found two articles that you may also find useful https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/pdf/10.1002/j.2051-5545.2009.tb00217.x - Grief and Bereavement: What psychiatrists need to know http://journals.sagepub.com/doi/pdf/10.2190/OM.61.4.b - The Dual Process Model of Coping with Bereavement: A Decade On
I hope you find these articles helpful!!
u3144311 - 11:10am, 10th October 2018 (UTC)
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editHi thereǃ Overall, i find your book chapter very interesting and informative. My only critique or suggestion is to maybe add bullet points under the emotional management technique and counselling section to make it flow a little betterǃ
--Hibbajaved (discuss • contribs) 11:37, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
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