Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Temptations
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Hi there U3111270. I like your page, it's quite engaging from the start, though I found that it was fairly heavy on the religious themes. Although very interesting, I would suggest maybe looking at the article, http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0191886914005339, which talks about self control and resistance against temptation, to look at the psychological aspects.
Good luck
RainbowUnicorn97 (discuss • contribs) 18:10, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
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Hey RainbowUnicorn97, I think you must have looked at my page before I had saved a massive edit I did on it! Im really interested to know why you think I have too much focus on religious themes? I mention Adam and Eve because I wanted to show the audience an example and to maybe help disregard temptation as an inclination to sin and ensure that it is seen as a psychological process. It was just a starting point for my chapter as I had no idea where to start! But that is the only mention I make to religion? Anyway! it is great to have your feedback and I have already looked at that article and at first I didnt really use anything from it, as it was repeating alot of information I already had but going back to it when you posted I have gotten a bit more from it, so thanks! U3111270 (discuss • contribs) 09:50, 20 October 2017 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:51, 17 October 2017 (UTC)
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Hi, interesting page! I know you'll probably pick it up later, but just in case, Jane wants to LOSE weight, rather than "loose". cheers! Linda --U100155 (discuss • contribs) 01:56, 21 October 2017 (UTC)
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Hey Linda, hahahaha! thanks for the pickup! Didnt even notice, I guess when you're the writer you tend to skim it all ;) U3111270 (discuss • contribs) 00:57, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
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