Latest comment: 7 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Hi,Hope this semester is going well for you.
My book chapter is also looking at what external elements can influence negative emotion. I had a look at some of the earlier chapters (from previous years) and it look like it might be a good idea to add in some ABS statistics on mental illnesses- particularly those the dsm considers to negative emotions eg anxiety , to be risk factors for. If I come across some good figures later on I'll be sure to share them.
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Overall, this is a problematic chapter because it lacks sufficient focus on the assigned topic and doesn't sufficiently review relevant literature to answer the question in the sub-title.
The Overview and Conclusion are OK, but are broader than required and lack sufficient focus on addressing the question in the sub-title. There are already other chapters about smoking cessation, smoking motivation etc. So, briefly mention these broader, related aspects and embed links to these chapters, allowing this chapter instead to provide a dedicated on focus on reviewing the best available academic literature about the effect of NW on NE.
This chapter is categorised as an "emotion" chapter (see the 2017 book table of contents and specific use of "negative emotion" in the title and sub-title - and no mention of motivation), but the chapter drifts unnecessarily into motivation for smoking and smoking cessation, as well as other non-"negative emotion" aspects of smoking.
There is too much general theoretical material about smoking and nicotine. Instead, summarise and provide links to further information, to allow this chapter to focus on the specific topic. The assigned topic really only starts to be addressed with the section titled "Nicotine Withdrawal and Associated Symptoms". A significant expansion of this section would help to provide a stronger chapter. The next most relevant section is "Smoking Cessation – Dealing with Negative Emotions" - again, expansion of this material would help to strengthen the chapter.
A lot of theoretical treatment models are presented - but none seem to mention or involve the role of negative emotions!?
The case studies did not seem to involve negative emotion in smoking cessation/nicotine withdrawal.
Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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Use the full chapter title and sub-title on the opening slide and in the name of the video because this helps to match the book chapter and to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation.