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Overall, this is a reasonable chapter which could be improved by focusing less on regrets in general (this has been covered by a previous chapter) and focusing more on end-of-life regrets (the specific focus of the current chapter).
The Overview and chapter is overly focused on regret as a general concept (this was covered in the 2016 chapter) and not focused enough on end-of-life regret.
Consider including a case study to help capture reader interest in the Overview.
Consider including practical, take-home messages that a reader can apply in everyday life.
Several relevant theories were described. Examples could help to illustrate their application.
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an introductory paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
Learning features
Basic of use of interwiki links - more use would make the text more interactive.
Basic use of images.
No use of tables.
Basic use of quizzes.
No use of case studies.
Spelling, grammar, and proofreading
The grammar for some sentences could be improved - e.g., see the [grammar?] tags.
Check and correct use of commas.
Spelling can be improved - e.g., see the [spelling?] tags.
APA style
Use APA style for Figure captions
Provide more detailed Figure captions that connect the image to the text e.g., what is the relevance of "MRI of orbitofrontal cortex"?
Citations
Use no more than the top three citations per point.
A comma is needed before "&" for citations involving three or more authors
However a comma is not needed e.g., for Coricelli, et al., 2007 -> Coricelli et al., 2007
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Audio recording quality is very quiet - review microphone set up. The audio on the very last slide was louder.
Consider muting the music during narration to help the viewer concentrate on the combination of visual information and narrated audio.
Use the full chapter title and sub-title on the opening slide and in the name of the video because this helps to match the book chapter and to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation.