Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Prenatal depression
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Hey :) just noticed that you haven't added the multimedia link to your page. James has given us the syntax to make the template for the book chapter and it helps a lot. the link to the syntax is: https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Template:Motivation_and_emotion/Book_chapter_structure --JazNF (discuss • contribs) 05:24, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
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Hey - I will let you know if I find any interesting articles, our chapters are at each end of the spectrum! Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Postpartum return to work motivation please feel free to look at my references for any overlap in infom--Sebastian Kelly (discuss • contribs) 02:14, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
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Hi. A great topic. Found some images on wiki commons: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Mother_and_Baby_on_Mother%27s_Day.jpg (mum and baby) https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Human-Male-White-Newborn-Baby-Crying.jpg (crying baby). Hope this is helpful and good luck! --U113403 (discuss • contribs) 12:07, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
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You could provide some internal links to other wiki pages for words like depression to assist the research of others. Including images within the large paragraphs of text will help to break it up for the reader I have also made some very minor spelling/grammar edits which you are welcome to reverse. --Jessann95 (discuss • contribs) 01:53, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
external link edit
Hi there, I have added an external link to PANDSI (post- and antenatal depression support information). They are a great organisation. --JazNF (discuss • contribs) 07:00, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
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