Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Physical versus emotional infidelity
Contribution to your "why people cheat" section edit
Hi there,
I was reading through your page and there is some really interesting content, it looks like it's shaping up to be a really interesting book chapter.
As interesting interactive item for your book chapter, I was thinking a case study of someone who has cheated, or the reasons why someone would cheat would fit really well into this section. Which in turn, could lead you into the next section where you provide theoretical reasoning for why someone would be unfaithful.
I added the tinder image (sourced from Wikicommons) and attached a link to the ashley madison scandal. Keep it or delete it, it's up to you.
Cheers, --Muzz2016 (discuss • contribs) 07:21, 7 October 2016 (UTC)
Hey, interesting topic and it looks a s though it is coming along well. I have included a few JA that relate to online infidelity, a good read and some interesting suggestions throughout. I hope they are helpful and the best of luck with your chapter :)
http://psp.sagepub.com/content/30/11/1375.full.pdf+html
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2802380/
--U3090066 (discuss • contribs) 19:28, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
Edited syntax of tables, boxes etc, edit
Hey,
I fixed the ted talk boxes for you :). If you don't like the lavenderbush background colour, you can find the code for changing it at the bottom of this page https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Help:Pretty_boxes. It's in the subsection that says Background. To change the colour go to edit source and where it says: background-color:LavenderBlush (your colour is "5=Lavenderblush") and paste a different background code into that section.
I also centred some of the text in you in the additional theories and descriptions box, and fixed most of your references for you. If you need anymore help just let me know.
Cheers, --Muzz2016 (discuss • contribs) 10:31, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
Title edit
Check the title - it is not the same as the book chapter table of contents. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:08, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
Wiki links edit
This chapter could be improved by linking the first mention of key words to corresponding Wikipedia articles e.g., anxiety. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:38, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
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