Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Mobile phone addiction
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Hi, this is a really great chapter on the addictive behaviours of phone use. The only small detail I would add would be to talk a little bit more about the driving accidents paragraph a bit more. I have found a great article that talks about the various factors regarding dialling and driving http://www.sciencedirect.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/science/article/pii/S0001457508001401. Hope you find this helpful! u31115009
Hi I have found a useful article which may help you to begin your chapter, it is titled: Evaluation of mobile phone addiction level and sleep quality in university students. The article will be a good source to start formulating the overview and definition headings of your chapter. It discusses that addiction is higher in specific groups of people such as those with a poor family income and those with type A personality. The article also discusses the impact addiction has on an individuals quality of sleep which would be an interesting area to include in your chapter. The article can be accessed through EBSCOhost on the university library website page. I hope you find this helpful, all the best! http://web.b.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/ehost/detail/detail?vid=64&sid=bb733175-f514-4060-870e-f258f4ca7c78%40sessionmgr120&hid=115&bdata=#AN=94136832&db=a9h --LeoDean1993 (discuss • contribs) 07:53, 1 October 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I have found a useful video on using cell phone is addictive, hope it's going to be helpful http://www.sbs.com.au/news/thefeed/story/phubbing-using-your-mobile-phone-addiction Also I find an article trying to explain this cell phone addiction from a person's psychological characters, the title is "A model of the relationship between psychological characteristics, mobile phone addiction and use of mobile phones by Taiwanese university female students", http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.chb.2012.06.020--U3121927 (discuss • contribs) 11:51, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
Hello! I have added some images, fixed your layout and general subheadings! I have also added the option to add some external links, for a wider breadth of information, for future improvement! --U3160224 (discuss • contribs) 05:40, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
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This chapter could be improved by linking the first mention of key words to corresponding Wikipedia articles e.g., anxiety. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:46, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
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