Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Laughter yoga and emotion
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editHey! I love this chapter - so interesting, do you do yoga yourself?
I would like to make a small recommendation; under the sub-heading 'what is laughter' you describe 'five types of laughter' in quite a long sentence, maybe consider using dot points here? --Sebastian Kelly (discuss • contribs) 02:11, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
Heading style
editUse default heading styles - remove bold etc. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:56, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
Structure
editAvoid having a single sub-section within a section; either add another sub-section or merge the content into the higher level section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:56, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
Feedback
editAPA standard is that numbers over 10 are written numerically. I would also suggest adding some images, tables, or putting content into coloured boxes to break up the text, as it is quite hard to look at for a long time.
--Cora.boyle (discuss • contribs) 02:00, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
Last minute feedback
edit--Jessann95 (discuss • contribs) 06:17, 23 October 2016 (UTC) I have added a link to another wiki that is relevant, plus made some minor spelling and grammar changes. I also suggest that you put some of the text into coloured boxes. I have provided a template below
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Past due feedback
editApologies for late feedback (have extension so running behind) - for future reference I found this chapter really interesting and informative. Definitely carrying the desired theme of the book to enhance people's lives through understanding of motivation and emotion. I can see that you took the earlier advice provided to you on board and I think that it has served you well. The dot points make for much easier reading. Great work! --U944295 (discuss • contribs) 13:39, 3 November 2016 (UTC)
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