Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Intimacy motivation
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editHey, read your chapter and did a little bit of grammar corrections. I also changed the casing on your headings since the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. Looks interesting so far, keep going :) - u3119387 8/10/16
Hey, I just thought I might mention that in Cloninger's biosocial theory of personality. ‘Reward dependence’ is a temperament that has a huge impact on social dependency and whether an individual is inclined to share intimately. The higher the reward dependence the warmer and more socially inclined the individual is. low reward dependence can lead to isolation and not sharing of intimate emotions etc. it might not be helpful but i though it was worth mentioning :) --U3080948 (discuss • contribs) 05:36, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
Hey, Interesting topic! I have attached some recent Journal articles that might be of assistance and offer a slightly different perspective to finish your chapter off. The first article talks about gender differences and women exhibiting higher implicit affiliation motivation than males, meta analytical results and good data to support the findings. The second article discuss the validity and reliability of measures of intimacy and the implications of biases in self report data. Good luck with finishing of your chapter :) http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0092656616300678 http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1162908816300263--U3090066 (discuss • contribs) 17:36, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
Hey!! I read through your book chapter and absolutely loved the content!! the only thing was that there is a lot of info and something visual to break that up could maybe be an option for you. Good luck!!--Lizzy94 (discuss • contribs) 10:53, 26 October 2016 (UTC)U3083568 (discuss • contribs) 05:36, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I found an interesting short video on the youtube discussing why we seek intimacy, I think it's relevant to your topic. Hope that's going to be helpful. it's called the urge to merge:why do we crave intimacy.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RWtkhfL1zg--U3121927 (discuss • contribs) 09:20, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
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editFYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:
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editAvoid having only one sub-section - drop it and integrate into a higher level - or add another sub-section. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:35, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
- Ping User:Reneeduffey, to help make sure that this feedback has been received. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:54, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
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