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Theory, in form of aetiology and risk factors, are well covered.
The topic was on depression, but there are also substantial portions of content about anxiety and schizophrenia. Focus on content that matches the topic.
Addition of case studies or examples could be helpful.
There is minimal use of images or tables; some images are used, but the chapter could be improved by adding more images.
Learning features
Add Interwiki links (e.g., to relevant Wikipedia articles and other Wikiversity book chapters) to make the text more interactive.
Quiz questions could be used to encourage reader engagement.
Spelling
Use Australian spelling (some general examples are hypothesize -> hypothesise; behavior -> behaviour).
Spelling could be improved - see the [spelling?] tags.
Grammar and proofreading
The grammar of some sentences could be improved (e.g., see the [grammar?] tags).
Check and correct the use of ownership apostrophes (e.g., individuals vs. individual's vs. individuals').
APA style
Check and correct the APA style for how to report numbers (Numbers under 10 should be written in words (e.g., five); numbers 10 and over should be written in numbers (e.g., 10)).
Check and correct the APA style formatting of in-text citations.
Add APA style captions to tables and figures.
Check and correct the use of "&" vs. "and" (Use ampersand (&) inside brackets and "and" outside brackets).
Check and correct the APA style for figure captions.
Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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A link to the presentation is not provided from book chapter (a link has now been added).
Fill out the description field (e.g., brief description of presentation, link back to the book chapter, license details, and possibly include references, image attributions, and/or audio transcript).
A copyright license for the presentation is not indicated (i.e., in the description or in the presentation slides).
No active hyperlink is provided back to the book chapter.