Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Antisocial Personality Disorder and emotion
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editHi there,
I think your chapter is quiet good. I Understand it is still currently a work in progress but I look forward to the addition of interactive materials such as images, hyperlinks etc. I think your current structure is very good and it flows very well currently. I have "starred" the page and will provide more feedback as the content goes up. Good Luck! --202.46.136.191 (discuss) 11:32, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
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editHello! I think your book chapter topic is very interesting and you write really well too. The points you have made throughout are really concise and you explain terms well. I think you may want to discuss intervention and treatment for antisocial personality disorder. The below links will provide you with more information regarding treatment options. National Collaborating Centre for Mental Health (UK. (2010). INTERVENTIONS FOR PEOPLE WITH ANTISOCIAL PERSONALITY DISORDER AND ASSOCIATED SYMPTOMS AND BEHAVIOURS. British Psychological Society. Gunderson, J. G., & Gabbard, G. O. (Eds.). (2008). Psychotherapy for personality disorders (Vol. 13). American Psychiatric Pub. Moeller, F. G., & Dougherty, D. M. (2001). Antisocial personality disorder, alcohol, and aggression. Alcohol Research and Health, 25(1), 5-11.
Goodluck and I look forward to reading your chapter!
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--U3034876 (discuss • contribs) 08:36, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
Hey girl :) i have just looked at your chapter and it looks so good so far :) i just have one suggestion- which is completely optional. Where you have put some headings and those coloured boxes, i reckon it could be cool to use something like this as it might be a bit more of a statement so the headings dont get lost :) (3083783ro (discuss • contribs) 09:24, 24 October 2015 (UTC)=3083783ro)
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