Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Risk perception and emotion
Colour
editI recommend using default colours for headings and backgrounds to maximise accessibility for those with visual impairment. e.g., check out Wikipedia articles. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:29, 23 October 2014 (UTC)
Feedback
editHi there,
I like your choice of colours on your book chapter, maybe think about putting some boxes or text without colour to break it up a little bit so readers don't get too confused. I edited some of your text also, you had the word definition and emotion used a number of times so i changed the repeated words for you. Good luck with the rest of your chapter :) Chernayy (discuss • contribs) 05:18, 24 October 2014 (UTC)
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OveralleditOverall, this is a well structured presentation. The structure is quite good. It may have been useful to introduce theories earlier in the presentation. Research and theory are incorporated nicely throughout. A clear effort has been made to focus on the important information from the chapter, and to provide an overview rather than reciting the whole chapter. The presentation begins quite abruptly. An overview slide could have been useful. The concluding slide provided a nice ending. Ideas are communicated effectively through audio and visuals. The voice over is well-paced, with engaging expression. The slides are quite good. Some slides include too much information - try to be brief and highlight only the important points to re-enforce the voice-over. The inclusion of images could also be useful. Try to avoid reading directly from slides. Basic production tools are used nicely to deliver this presentation. The audio quality is good. The visuals are clear. A link back to the book chapter is not provided. Copyright license is not cited. |
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