Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Reticular formation, arousal and emotion
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editHi there, I was doing some research & found this article which may be beneficial for your book chapter: Arousal of cerebral cortex electroencephalogram consequent to high-frequency stimulation of ventral medullary reticular formation. http://web.b.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/ehost/detail/detail?vid=7&sid=bd456765-82c0-431e-9c3a-242cec846123%40sessionmgr115&hid=125&bdata=#db=a9h&AN=27870372
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editWell done so far. Your information was VERY informative yet easy to read. It flowed effortlessly and the headings were in a logical order. I suspect you have not finished yet but it would be good if you could add some colour and diagrams to compliment your writing and make it a bit more appealing. I also found the "putting it all together" topic clever and thought it was an effective yet informal way to wrap up your chapter and it may be something that i employ. Goodluck with the rest of your work. JacquelineSpence (discuss • contribs) 08:21, 21 October 2014 (UTC)
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OveralleditAn interesting and well delivered presentation. Well done. The structure is clear, and the flow is logical. Research is well integrated throughout. Theory is less of a focus, and this is an area for potential improvement. An overview is provided at the beginning of the presentation. An informal conclusion is provided. Communication is good. The voice-over is adequately paced, with good expression and pauses between sentences and slides. An appropriate level of information is provided on the slides. The design of the slides is very basic. The use of more figures and colours would help to make them more engaging. Basic production tools are used effectively. The audio quality is good, although there is a dull 'hum' in the background. The visuals are clear. A link to the book chapter is provided. Image copyright licence information is provided. |
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