Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Knowledge sharing motivation

feedback

hey, this is a really interesting topic, if you google 'power and knowledge', you will find heaps on why people keep knowledge secret, and why people share/relinquish knowledge. From previous study I recall this as being a huge area in the social work field. I look forward to reading your chapter!

user:smelle24 21:26, 16 October 2014

Heading casing

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use: ==Cats and dogs== rather than ==Cats and Dogs== -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:27, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

References

hi just noticed you have not italicised the journal name and volume number. --Hynes08 (discuss • contribs) 00:46, 24 October 2014 (UTC)

Multimedia feedback

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Overall This is a basic, but sufficient presentation. Structure and content The structure is good and the flow between ideas is logical. Theory is a major focus of the presentation. Research could have been better integrated. Well done including a range of perspectives (i.e. the 'barriers to motivation' section). Clearer introduction and conclusion sections would be beneficial. Communication The voice-over is well paced, with appropriate pauses between sentences. However, limited expression was used. It is not a requirement to use slides, however this presentation could have been improved by providing some kind of visual aid to re-enforce the information being delivered verbally. This would have made it more engaging and easier to follow. Production quality Production quality is quite poor. The audio is very quiet and difficult to hear (even with headphones in). There is some background noise. The visuals are dark and slightly fuzzy. The presentation is slightly overtime. No link back to the book chapter is provided.

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Overall This is a basic chapter which applies a wide variety of motivational theories to explain knowledge sharing.F or more feedback, see my copyedits and comments below. Theory A wide range of theories are covered - probably too many. The chapter could be improved by concentrating in more depth on a smaller number of theories. Research General motivational theories were used and applied; the chapter could be improved by focusing on theories which have been used to research knowledge sharing e.g., http://scholar.google.com.au/scholar?hl=en&q=knowledge+sharing+motivation&btnG=&as_sdt=1%2C5&as_sdtp= When describing important research findings, indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship. Written expression Written expression Avoid one sentence paragraphs. A paragraph should typically consist of three to five sentences. Avoid one paragraph sections. A section should have at least two paragraphs. Layout See earlier comments about heading casing Tables and/or Figures were not used. Learning features The text could become more interactive by including interwiki links. APA style Check/correct APA style for in-text citations. Put in-text citations in alphabetical order. Direct quotes are probably over-used in this chapter need page numbers et al -> et al. Use ampersand (&) inside brackets and "and" outside brackets. The reference list is not in full APA style.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:28, 1 December 2014 (UTC)