Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Cosmetic surgery motivation
Im currently drafting my chapter - this isn't the completed product (in terms of formatting and set up) u3014122
Some ideas
editMake your Chapter preface and Personal motivations sections into a case study.
Remember that only the first word in titles should be capitalised.
Limit subjective opinions such as 'looking at me, you would not know that I have had any work done'.
The last paragraph of the Personal motivations section could create a good base for the Overview section. N8. (discuss • contribs) 02:18, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
Theories
editHey! This is really interesting, I've always wondered what motivates someone to get cosmetic surgery. Just remember to link it back to theories we have discussed throughout the semester. The marking criteria on the unit outline states: "Theory (30%): Identify, understand, and make effective use of key motivation and/or emotion theoretical concepts in exploring the topic. Demonstrate critical thinking and application of the theor(ies)." Considering how heavily weighted the theoretical side is, make sure you include this. Have a flick through the text book for ideas, it's so helpful! Good luck with the rest :) --121.223.187.104 (discuss) 10:17, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
Heading casing
editFYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:
==Cats and dogs== |
Target audience
editNote that the target audience is a layperson interested in improving something about themselves from psychological science (i.e., the target audience is broader than psychology students). -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:07, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
Image captions
editI recommend providing APA style captions for images. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:32, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
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