Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2014/Appraisal and emotion
Potential Reference
edithttp://www.ocf.berkeley.edu/~eerlab/pdf/papers/2007_Siemer_Same%20SItuation.pdf
Potential reference if you were looking for something like this.
Pat3068181 --Pat3068181 (discuss • contribs) 01:55, 21 October 2014 (UTC)
Good job, a few suggestions
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Jumped straight on your page because we both used the same theory! Good to see we both got the same ideas and overall concept of the theory - You did really well. The colours and diagrams do a really good job at keeping the reader interested, however could I suggest that maybe you add some photo’s or colour at the top, just to ‘grab’ the readers attention? Otherwise - good content, use of application in case studies, and understanding of the theory. Also - for any last minute touch ups, have a look at my page and watch the video I linked - Found it very useful with understanding the theory. My topic is Comfort Eating: How and why do people use comfort eating as a way to cope with negative emotions? Goodluck!
u3082340 (discuss • contribs)
Heading casing
editFYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:
==Cats and dogs== |
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RenaeLN (discuss • contribs) 01:55, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:17, 8 December 2014 (UTC)