Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2010/Promiscuity motivation

Chapter feedback

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Overall Overall, this is a very strong chapter, which stays focused on the topic and makes equally effective and considered use of both theory and research, combined with very good written expression and use of additional learning features. See my edits for examples of how the chapter could be improved. Theory Research Written expression

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:44, 12 December 2010 (UTC)

Multimedia presentation feedback

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Overall Overview Overall, this was an effective introduction and summary of the chapter using narrated, animated bullet-point slides. Friendly introduction Font size - make your minimal text size a bit larger Good use of different font colour on the slides and animations of bullet points. Excellent invite to think critically and make up your own mind I liked the use of first person - it made the presentation more immediate and personable I also liked that you shared your learning journal and changed your ideas as you researched and learnt more - it feels like you are a colleague learning and sharing your curiousity, questions and knowledge. Narration voice was clear and easy to listen to; well-paced Limited use of images. Perhaps some examples would help? Content Conclusion Audio Video Meta-data Licensing

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:13, 14 December 2010 (UTC)