Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Fundamental attribution error and emotion

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:16, 5 October 2022 (UTC)

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Hi,

I found a youtube video which on fundamental attribution error which may be interesting to include in your external links. I have attached the link below :)

What is the fundamental attribution error? U3190094 (discuss • contribs) 10:12, 10 October 2022 (UTC)