Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2019/Affective computing

Heading casing

FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings (or sentence casing). For example, use: ==Cats and dogs== rather than ==Cats and Dogs== -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:45, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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Title and sub-title Not provided I've added User page Created, with description about self and link to book chapter Used effectively Social contribution One summarised with links to evidence Section headings An overly complex 4-level heading structure is proposed - simplify. Each section should have 0 or 2+ sub-sections. Make sure to avoid providing too much background/generic material. Instead briefly summarise background concepts and provide wiki links to further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question posed by the sub-title of chapter. Key points Overview and Conclusion are empty - these are the most important sections. Several other proposed sections are empty (incomplete). It is unclear how the material about "emotion visualisation" related to "affective computing". Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles. Consider including more examples/case studies. Consider embedding one quiz question per major section rather than having one longer quiz towards the end. Image Provided References Move Wikipedia links into See also section and use internal linking style. For full APA style: Use correct capitalisation Use correct italicisation Use the new recommended format for dois - http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2014/07/how-to-use-the-new-doi-format-in-apa-style.html Do not include issue numbers for journals which are continuously numbered within a volume Resources See also Not provided Rename links so that they are more user friendly Also link to past relevant chapters External links Use bullet-points

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:45, 22 September 2019 (UTC)