Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Play motivation

Questions

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Heading casing

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FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:

==Cats and dogs==

rather than

==Cats and Dogs==

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:34, 17 October 2017 (UTC)Reply


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Title, sub-title, TOC

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  1. Excellent

User page

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  1. Created
  2. Used effectively

Social contribution

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  1. None summarised with links to evidence

Section headings

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  1. See earlier comments about heading casing
  2. Basic, 1-level heading structure - would benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure.
  3. Make sure to avoid providing too much background/generic material. Instead briefly summarise background concepts and provide wiki links to further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question posed by the sub-title of chapter.

Key points

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  1. Brief key points provided for each section, but lacking in detail and would benefit from further development, including citations
  2. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles.
  3. Consider including more examples/case studies.
  4. Consider embedding one quiz question per major section rather than having one longer quiz towards the end.

Image

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  1. Two images embedded
  2. Consider increasing image size from default
  3. Consider enhancing figure captions to help connect the image more strongly to key points being made in the text

References

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  1. Only one reference provided
  2. For full APA style:
    1. Use correct italicisation

Resources

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  1. See also
    1. Excellent
  2. External links
    1. Rename the links so that they are more meaningful

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:34, 17 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

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