Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2013/Oxytocin and emotion

Hey Clarev, Thank you for your feedback, that is a really good idea, unfortunately I've run out of words haha so I can't really add anything. Your topic seems really interesting and your chapter is looking good, do you mind if I link your page to mine? You can do the same with mine of you like. :) Bilbo Baggins (discuss • contribs) 08:39, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Go ahead, I will link to yours. Good luck! - Clarev (discuss • contribs) 09:20, 4 November 2013 (UTC)

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Overall Well done for taking a potentially complex topic, and presenting it in a clear way which is appropriate for the target audience. Nice job! Theory Appropriate theories are identified in this chapter, however to improve further, explore the constructs more thoroughly. Practical application is covered nicely. Research A range of interesting and important research is presented. A particular strength of the chapter is that key studies are explained in greater detail. Try to include concluding sentences in the paragraphs where research is presented - this is a way of incorporating some critical thinking. Written expression The chapter is well presented and the structure is logical. The quiz is great. APA style is generally adhered to, but please ensure that all ideas/information taken from the literature are referenced. Also, the chapter can be improved through the inclusion of more links throughout. ShaunaB (discuss • contribs)

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Overall This is very nicely presented, with clear communication and a good summary of chapter content. Well done! Structure and content Theory and research are well integrated throughout. Key concepts are well identified and included. The flow is logical and clear. Communication The presenter is engaging, speaks clearly and at an appropriate pace. I would suggest that the text is a little too small, however this is only a minor area for improvement. Production quality Nice use of Prezi to make this presentation look very professional. Sound and picture quality are both clear. ShaunaB (discuss • contribs)